5 Responses to “On the Shores of a Beautiful Lake”

1. Mike Says:
   August 10th, 2008 at 3:33 pm

   great poem!

2. scatterhaiku Says:
   August 18th, 2008 at 12:24 am

   great feeling and imagery relating to opulence and luxury here.

3. Frost Says:
   September 1st, 2008 at 9:35 am

   This is some beautiful poetry, thanks for allowing us to see that.

4. Josh Says:
   September 1st, 2008 at 9:37 am

   I love this poem, sounds like the kind of place you want to take you girlfriend….

5. Mike Says:
   December 12th, 2008 at 9:03 am

   Yeah. This is a wonderful poem. Makes me think of innertubing on Lake Michigan.

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