Front-line in the Eyes of a Commander
You can hear a round of applause,
When a gallant American soldier falls,
Deep down the dark halls,
The applause amplifies as time stalls,
Everything is quiet and still,
Even in the midst of a painful shrill,
Even in the Midst of someone being killed,
You can still hear the thrill,
Screaming and yelling so loud,
Each one saying, “I’m so proud,”
I sit there and I’m like wow,
Look at the time now, somehow,
We have been here for a hundred years,
While American Soldiers are out there shedding tears,
But do not fear,
Because they’re fighting for freedom’s sake, dears,
So do not shed any tears,
The end is near; look it’s almost here,
But when is almost, someone asks,
Almost is almost, was the reply,
Almost is when we can no longer try,
When man can no longer cry,
When we can no longer ask why,
Almost is when we can only sit and sigh,
When we reach the limits of the sky,
Almost is when we rot and die,
That’s soon enough, right? Almost…






August 14th, 2008 at 8:51 pm
This is actually really good … is this yours?
August 15th, 2008 at 5:25 pm
thanks, and yes, it is.
August 18th, 2008 at 12:23 am
lovely lines.
i like the use of the word, ‘almost’ repeatedly to make the point, among others, that no one really knows when all this will end.
August 24th, 2008 at 11:14 pm
Great poem. This reminds me of books like All Quiet on the Western Front and the Red Badge of Courage.
September 1st, 2008 at 9:39 am
Wow, you wrote this, that’s a really good poem, you shuold get it published =D
December 12th, 2008 at 9:02 am
Great poem. It reminds me of those war movies like Saving Private Ryan. The word “almost” is very interesting too. It gives room for readers to imagine the true meaning of the poem.